Toradora is the sec­ond series in my win­ter catch-up blitz, and it left me speech­less. There is no excuse why I did not pick this show up, even if it aired was dur­ing my the­sis semes­ter. And I call myself a romance-drama fan? *rage@self*

The show sucked me in as early as episode 2 (if I had only watched 1 more ep back then!). By episode 19 (Christ­mas Eve Fes­ti­val), it was already com­pet­ing for my top spot for anime in both the romance (Clan­nad, ef) and drama gen­res (Kanon, DC2SS). Two episodes later when Taiga uncon­sciously voiced her love, it crushed its com­peti­tors and moved onto con­sol­i­dat­ing its posi­tion. By the time the epi­logue rolled, I was left a com­plete emo­tional wreck: happy and rejoic­ing for the cou­ple, but also utterly drained. I had long lost track of how many times tears were brought to my eyes or how many min­utes I was left sob­bing loudly before the pro­jec­tor screen.

[ Shit shit SHIT, I don’t know what hap­pened but some­how I hit the pub­lish but­ton while work­ing on the draft right before going to sleep. That was not sup­pose to hap­pen. I hur­ried to fin­ish and re-published this, will add pic­tars once I get back. This is a dis­as­ter >_< ]

Kita­mura gets my Most Valu­able Char­ac­ter award

Look­ing back to com­pile my thoughts, I was left won­der­ing just why Toradora! destroyed my other beloved romance/drama series so hand­ily, from Kimi­nozo to Shuf­fle! to Clan­nad . It only took me a minute to real­ize that the oth­ers were almost all Visual Novel adap­ta­tions (do Japan­ese guys love cry­ing more than girls or some­thing?). It took me much longer to pin­point just what aspects of the stan­dard Visual Novel sto­ry­board­ing rou­tine caused it to be so out­classed by a light novel series.

Best! Friend! Forever!

Multi-Character Involve­ment

A visual novel is always about the main char­ac­ter and his sur­round­ing cast of hero­ines. The MC then pro­ceeds to branch off into indi­vid­ual routes and then solve each of the heroine’s dilem­mas. Sup­port­ing char­ac­ter may be avail­able to pro­vide advice and back­story in the indi­vid­ual arcs but in the end their role is always lim­ited. Make no mis­take, it is always the MC that is the mover of things, The Magi­cian of the story, whether it be in a Yuuichi (Kanon) good way or a Takayuki (Kimi­nozo) bad way. The Visual Nov­els want to main­tain this pat­tern in order to keep the player in con­trol of the game’s flow and direc­tion. Fur­ther­more, the main char­ac­ter must always be in the obvi­ous cen­ter of all the drama from the very start. While one or two love poly­gons may be pre­sented as the focus of the Vis­nov (School Days, White Album), they usu­ally don’t evolve into a series of over­lap­ping tri­an­gles that makes the rela­tion­ship chart look like a steplad­der. Well unfor­tu­nately, the cir­cle of friends that pro­pels the drama for­ward, rather than the MC, is also what gave Toradora its value.

Would Toradora be as good if Kita­mura wasn’t kept in the cen­ter of the love poly­gon drama for so long? I doubt it. Would they have been able to do it if the Ryuuji/MC (and hence the player) didn’t sin­cerely believe that Taiga was in love with some­one else? I doubt that too. Would they have been able to do this in a Visual Novel: would the fans be able to keep their atten­tion on Taiga if, for most of the series, was busy look­ing at some­one else? Would they be able to present Kitamura’s arc prop­erly? I won­der. Maybe I should try the Toradora visual novel out and see how they did it.

Char­ac­ter Diver­sity and Multipathing

To hit all the Moe bases out there, a Visual Novel always attempts to present a wide vari­ety of char­ac­ters: you have the osana­jimi, the genki, the tsun­dere, the idol, the loli, etc. Some­times they’ll leave out one role or com­bine oth­ers, but there’s usu­ally a selec­tion of hero­ines. The fault here is that some of them sim­ply won’t fit into the main story. Their arcs might be indi­vid­u­ally inter­est­ing, but when they’re mixed into an anime adap­ta­tion they don’t help build up the drama in the true path. Instead it often feels like a series of dis­jointed arcs mixed into one anthol­ogy — except with the same MC tying them all together. Not only does this wreck havoc for the pac­ing, but it also deval­ues the OTP (One True Pair) rela­tion­ship. After all, dear MC did get involved in all these other char­ac­ters who had lit­tle or noth­ing to do with his soulmate.

Imag­ine if all five routes of Kanon were tied together like the paths of Nayuki and Ayu. How much bet­ter would that make the series? This is also why, from a pure romance/drama anime per­spec­tive, Clan­nad is bet­ter than Kanon: because they cut out the two paths they really didn’t, and couldn’t, be fit into Nagisa’s route (Kyou and Tomoyo arcs, each resolved with an OVA episode). This made the Tomoya x Nag­isa pair­ing all the more pre­cious and valuable.

How early was this? Ep8? Damn I wasn’t expect­ing that.

Cry­ing Game vs. Con­tin­u­ous Drama with Inter­mixed Comedy

Sorry KEY, but Toradora’s pac­ing just sucker punched your orig­i­nal cry­ing game for­mula in the face. Instead of build­ing up the char­ac­ters grad­u­ally through pure humor and slice-of-life, drop­ping hints of the pri­mary con­flict along the way, and then hit­ting the cli­max three-quarters of the way in, Toradora starts devel­op­ing every­thing early. True, the first half of the series is still mostly slice-of-life, and we notice only the seeds of the love tri­an­gles being planted, but the drama and sad­ness was already there. Even dur­ing the early episodes of Toradora, I was already feel­ing sym­pa­thetic and sad for the character’s fail­ures and cheer­ing for their suc­cess. In any other series, I’d still be too busy just warm­ing up to the char­ac­ters while ador­ing their cuteness.

Basi­cally what I’m say­ing is that the tra­di­tional cry­ing game for­mula relies on the char­ac­ter traits: their cute­ness, their Moe, their blun­ders, in order to draw the audi­ence in. Toradora does the same thing, but it also empha­size upon one more: the tri­als and fail­ures of their first crush/love, expe­ri­enced in first per­son. It’s still a mod­i­fied cry­ing game approach, but it’s also so much better.

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11 Responses to “Toradora Exposing a Weakness in Visual Novel Adaptation?”
  1. Topspin says:

    I know I’ll remem­ber ToraDora in two phrases: “toradorable” and “mou ichido”.

    I don’t think it’s too mys­te­ri­ous why it was bet­ter than expected — they don’t jerk you around. They focus on the even­tual pair­ing so much that you’d have to be blind to think that any­one else would end up with Ryu­uji. You get the inside scoop on how the two fell in love, and how hard that jour­ney was.

    By the time you get to the epic kiss scene you know that it’s been hard-earned and that the two of them truly do love each other. It also helped that Ryu­uji was a great male lead and not some generic “insert player char­ac­ter here” wisp like in most novel adap­ta­tions. I just wish the last few episodes didn’t feel so rushed, espe­cially the weak second-half of the last episode.

  2. Yeah, the rea­son a light novel can make for a more suc­cess­ful anime in this regard, espe­cially in this genre, is due to the lin­ear narrative.

    When the orig­i­nal authors write a visual novel, they (gen­er­ally) never really intend for the events in all the dif­fer­ent paths to be pos­si­ble in the other paths as part of one giant uni­verse. If you’re on hero­ine A’s path, you see her story, and on hero­ine B’s path, you see her story, and it’s one or the other. The whole game is a series of “what if” alter­nate uni­verses, pos­si­bly joined together in some way in the end depend­ing on the story (see Clan­nad, for exam­ple). But when­ver they make anime for visual novel sto­ries, they gen­er­ally try to mesh all of these alter­nate uni­verses into one sin­gle lin­ear story, and that’s always messy. Unless the writer is really, really good and/or they take a lot of lib­er­ties with the source (not pop­u­lar with the fans), it’ll always feel awk­ward. With light nov­els, as with manga, the adap­ta­tion writ­ers have the advan­tage of being able to deliver the story in a way that matches the orig­i­nal author’s design, so it has the poten­tial to be a lot smoother espe­cially in the areas you men­tioned: bal­ance of roles of the char­ac­ters, bet­ter use of sup­port­ing char­ac­ters, more bal­anced flow of drama/comedy, and so on. That’s because the novel writer gen­er­ally thinks about these things in the pac­ing of their sto­ries and books.

    So all that to say, I don’t know if it’s really a weak­ness in visual novel design exactly (I can think of a num­ber of titles that use this branching/alternate uni­verse con­cept to their advan­tage in terms of build­ing a really strong cohe­sive­ness in the game), but I think it’s more the com­pro­mises they make when adapt­ing the games for anime. It’s just not as easy to pull off.

  3. Ahh… should clar­ify that I wrote the above when the three points at the bot­tom were just bul­let points with­out full para­graphs. Now that you’ve expanded your points and added details, it makes my com­ments rather redun­dant! Any­way, this is why it’s always a good idea to indi­cate your edits. :p

  4. Aorii says:

    @Relentlessflame:
    Yeah, I know, it’s a mas­sive screw-up. I pretty much started up my google reader this morn­ing and went WTF! WHY IS THAT POST PUBLISHED! Ugh…
    Thanks for the response though. I didn’t read it until after I re-published it but yeah, you hit my sen­ti­ments right on with that.
    Visual Novel adap­ta­tions would prob­a­bly do a lot bet­ter if they didn’t seek to hit all the paths/alternate-universes, but whether it’s pres­sure from the fans or the maker they often end up hav­ing lit­tle say it seems. It’s either that or they sim­ply fail to real­ize the truth.
    Your com­ment also points out that my title is prob­a­bly… inac­cu­rate. Should be “Visual Novel Adap­ta­tion” rather than “Design”.

    @Topspin:
    “It’s been hard-earned and that the two of them truly do love each other.” — That line really hit the spot.
    Per­son­ally I have mixed feel­ings on whether the finale was rushed though. On one hand, it’s obvi­ous they weren’t inter­ested in get­ting into the details of how Taiga resolved her fam­ily issues: in which case what they did is right oth­er­wise things would just feel dragged out with not much left to men­tion. On the other hand, I really wish they did pro­vide another arc on that, just as I wish that episode would jump to their mar­riage. We know it’s going to hap­pen, but I want to see it, not to men­tion I’m still won­der­ing if Ryu­uji actu­ally went to col­lege or not.

  5. bakahyl says:

    If you are play­ing the Toradora visual novel for that, then you will be dis­ap­pointed. Because the game has an orig­i­nal story which hap­pens after the christ­mas rejection.

  6. Topspin says:

    @relentlessflame;
    I agree, a lin­ear plot makes the dif­fer­ence. But with the kind of bud­get those adap­ta­tions usu­ally get you’d fig­ure they could bet­ter lin­earize the game’s plots. True Tears, for instance, started off great and then imploded. By the end Shin felt like a plank of wood with “insert player char­ac­ter here” writ­ten on him, and the basic sce­nario felt like it just ran­domly picked a direc­tion rather than evolv­ing a rela­tion­ship between the ulti­mate pair­ing. You get to the point where a choice of pair­ing is made, but the choice feels arbi­trary most of the time.

    @Aroii;
    I actu­ally really liked the mate­r­ial for the end­ing, but the last few eps did feel rushed. I didn’t mind at all until the last half of the last episode, though. But over­all, it was a bet­ter end­ing than most in terms of clo­sure for it’s char­ac­ters. I didn’t need to see the wed­ding, but it would have been nice to at least know that Taiga wrapped things up with her par­ents and got their bless­ing (the end was pretty murky about that).

  7. choux says:

    Okay, I can’t bring myself to agree with you about a few things. Before that though, let me just agree with you about the fact that Toradora is a great show.

    Firstly, TRUE TEARS ISN’T BASED OFF OF A VISUAL NOVEL. Yes, there WAS a visual novel of the same name, but it was a piece of crap (take my word for it), and the anime has absolutely NOTHING to do with it (aside from hav­ing the same name). It is, through and through, an anime orig­i­nal. Sec­ondly, I hope that you meant that Toradora was bet­ter than the visual novel adap­tions, because there are some light novel series that I wouldn’t exactly call good (cough*zeronotsukaima*cough) The main char­ac­ter isn’t nec­es­sar­ily the one that dic­tates the events that occur in the story. In sto­ries like Sekien no Inganok, it’s the envi­ron­ment itself which direct all the events within the story; and in sto­ries like Haruka ni aogi Uruwashino, the main char­ac­ter does next to noth­ing and is lit­tle more than a medium for the reader (though that might not nec­es­sar­ily be a good thing). Besides, you wouldn’t say that Ryuji didn’t do any­thing to move the plot along, would you?

    Also, a visual novel won’t always present a large cast to hit the moe bases (although many of them do). And even if there are so many char­ac­ters thrown in there, it doesn’t mean that the main story will be hor­ri­ble. There are many sto­ries like G-senjou no Maou (with an epic main story which does not require the read­ing of the indi­vid­ual paths) or even Kikoku­gai (with its lin­ear plot), which IS suited to an anime adap­tion. There are also sto­ries like EVer17 where each indi­vid­ual path is care­fully crafted to fit into the over­all sto­ry­line. Besides, why blame the visual novel for­mat for the ani­ma­tion studio’s inabil­ity to focus on a sin­gle story? I do agree with you that some­times the story feels hashed together (cough*Kanon*cough); and I also think that mak­ing the Tomoyo and Kyou sto­ries into an OVA was a good idea. But the vast major­ity of Visual Nov­els aren’t cry­ing games. By that, I mean that the pur­pose of the story isn’t to make you bawl you eyes out like Air. There are sto­ries like Moshimo Ashita ga Hare­naraba that DOES start the drama right away, that DOES have enough plot for me to draw a com­pli­cated rela­tion­ship chart, but they just didn’t get animated.

    Yes, I agree with you that TOO MANY sto­ries rely on the moe, but Toradora isn’t exactly devoid of moe stereo­types either (tsun­dere, genki, devil, etc etc etc). There are excep­tion to every rule, and an entire branch media doesn’t deserve to be cat­e­go­rized in black and white boxes.
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  8. Aorii says:

    @bakahyl
    Well at least it’s orig­i­nal con­tent I guess.

    @Choux
    Whoa, that felt like a bit of a rage post!? This is also when I know bet­ter than to face headon against the expert of the domain.
    Sorry if I sound black & white, espe­cially since that’s some­thing I hate myself (ARG I’m turn­ing into a hyp­ocrite!!!), but I’m mainly look­ing at some of the more generic flaws of the genre.

    But yeah, that explains why when I watched True Tears it was noth­ing like the Insani demo that got trans­lated, and I ended up spend­ing some time try­ing to fig­ure out where it is from before giv­ing up. Thanks for clar­i­fy­ing that (and I’ll remove it from post before any­one else misunderstands).

    Ryu­uji does his part, but I don’t think he’s the cen­ter­piece of it all. Like I said, it’s a rel­a­tively bal­anced team effort, rather than hav­ing the MC dri­ving and the rest giv­ing directions.

    I real­ize there are visual nov­els out there who doesn’t try to hit the moe bases and does spend its time putting every­thing together into one plot. Although I must admit Ever17 skipped my atten­tion, whereas Hig­urashi took the spot and I cer­tainly don’t cat­e­go­rize that as romance/drama. But once again that’s a case of there being a wide vari­ety of Vis­novs out there. There’s also cases like ef out there which com­pletely goes out the norm since the Vis­nov never fol­lowed it to begin with. Unfor­tu­nately, most of the adap­ta­tions that fit squarely into the romance/genre drama does tend to fol­low some ver­sion of KEY’s model, which is kind of what I’m cap­i­tal­iz­ing on.
    Once again, the switch from “visual novel design” to “… adap­ta­tion” is sound­ing more appropriate.

  9. Honya says:

    I’m quite impressed that Toradora made it to the top of your favorite anime list. I hope now you believe what me, Peaches and every­one else was say­ing about Toradora.

    Also I need to men­tion what you wrote about (and every­one else expanded upon) in regards to a more well-crafted cohe­sive story in which the indi­vid­ual plot threads do not seem arbi­trar­ily pieced together IS one of the rea­sons I love 07th Expan­sion and Ever 17 so much since every­thing builds up to a over­ar­ch­ing nar­ra­tive. By the way that’s the way I’ve been con­struct­ing the plot for my orig­i­nal story.

    I’ll just keep my com­ment short since we can always talk about this any­time. (I’ll be online all win­ter break!!)

  10. Topspin says:

    @Choux;
    Sorry if I got you worked up, that’s just my bias :) I didn’t enjoy the char­ac­ters in True Tears as much as other peo­ple did, but I’m not try­ing to say it was any­where near as bad as Tsukaima. I just pre­fer ToraDora, despite it’s more cliched char­ac­ters. I hap­pen to also agree that there are some KEY-style adap­ta­tions that feel more cohe­sive.. if I sounded like I was attack­ing the whole sub-genre then that wasn’t my intent. I just agree with the idea with this article’s premise that some­thing like ToraDora exposes a gen­eral weak­ness, but don’t con­sider it’s some­thing cat­e­gor­i­cally wrong with the sub-genre.

    @Aorii;
    Yeah I also hope I didn’t come across as imply­ing that Ryu­uji car­ried the whole show. I just felt he was a deserv­ing male lead despite his cal­lous­ness and other flaws; I don’t often feel that way about male leads in these love polygon/harem type shows unless the guy is pathet­i­cally pigeon­holed into being a good natured doormat.

  11. Aorii says:

    @Honya: Hey hey, I never said I didn’t believe you guys I just reme­ber say­ing that Toradora’s premise and the first part of the Light­nov didn’t really draw me in (I’m also not a fan of tsun­deres with a vio­lent back­lash). Also I don’t remem­ber you guys talk­ing to me that much about it, halfway cause I was really busy that semes­ter. I mean, not that I care or any­thing, but you and Peaches don’t actu­ally talk to me much about your thoughts on cur­rent series (<_< ).

    @Topspin:
    Yeah, male leads in poly­gon series tend to either ‘get tossed about by cir­cum­stances while doing noth­ing right’ or is a pathetic nice-guy-without-backbone. UGH!
    Now that I think about it, this tends to hap­pen with female leads in shoujo series also, except it’s not quite as repul­sive… I need to check this out.

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